Chinese Poem

 Thanks to a sudden visit from a mouse, the following poem was composed by myself.

昨夜杰瑞突来访，

家里老少皆惊魂；

次日忙买捕捉器，

唯独不见汤踪影.

It is then edited by Shyne Loong

昨夜杰瑞突来访，

家里老少心慌慌；

次日忙买捕捉器，

唯独不见那個汤。

It is then subsequently modified by Suyi

杰瑞来访不离去，

家里老少很生气；

次日忙买捕捉器，

期盼杰瑞快进去。

and further improvised to

昨夜杰瑞来我家，

老少心情皆不佳；

次日忙买捕捉器，

还盼老汤快回家。

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